Make this template look more like unsub.txt. Improves readability.

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/templates/en/verify.txt b/templates/en/verify.txt
index 22e6e5cc4..36229f8c6 100644
--- a/templates/en/verify.txt
+++ b/templates/en/verify.txt
@@ -1,19 +1,22 @@
-%(listname)s -- confirmation of subscription -- request %(cookie)s
+Mailing list subscription confirmation notice for mailing list %(listname)s
 
 We have received a request%(remote)s for subscription of your email
-address, <%(email)s>, to the %(listaddr)s mailing list.  To confirm
-the request, please send a message to %(requestaddr)s, and either:
+address, "%(email)s", to the %(listaddr)s mailing list.  To confirm
+that you want to be added to this mailing list, simply reply to this
+message, keeping the Subject: header intact.  Or visit this web page:
 
-- maintain the subject line as is (the reply's additional "Re:" is ok),
+    %(confirmurl)s
 
-- or include the following line - and only the following line - in
-the message body: 
+Or include the following line -- and only the following line -- in a
+message to %(requestaddr)s:
 
-confirm %(cookie)s
+    confirm %(cookie)s
 
-(Simply sending a 'reply' to this message should work from most email
-interfaces, since that usually leaves the subject line in the right
-form.)
+Note that simply sending a `reply' to this message should work from
+most mail readers, since that usually leaves the Subject: line in
+the right form (additional "Re:" text in the Subject: is okay).
 
-If you do not wish to subscribe to this list, please simply disregard
-this message.  Send questions to %(listadmin)s.
+If you do not wish to be subscribed from this list, please simply
+disregard this message.  If you think you are being maliciously
+subscribed to the list, or have any other questions, send them to
+%(listadmin)s.