Shortened so that we get to the meat earlier. Contains links to the

detailed instructions page.

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 38 deletions

diff --git a/templates/en/admindbpreamble.html b/templates/en/admindbpreamble.html
index 806c91f1e..9d4afd76b 100644
--- a/templates/en/admindbpreamble.html
+++ b/templates/en/admindbpreamble.html
@@ -1,40 +1,10 @@
-This page contains the current set of administrative requests
-requiring your approval for the mailing list <em>%(listname)s</em>.
-First you will find the list of pending subscription requests (if
-there are any), followed by any mailing list postings being held for
-your approval.
+This page contains a subset of the <em>%(listname)s</em> mailing list
+postings that are being held for you approval.  It currently shows
+%(description)s
 
-<p>For each administrative request, please select the action to take
-by choosing one of:
+<p>For each administrative request, please select the action to take,
+clicking on the <b>Submit All Data</b> when finished.  More detailed
+instructions are available <a href="%(detailsurl)s">here</a>.
 
-<ul>
-<li><b>Defer</b> -- Defer your decision until later.  No action is
-    taken for this request, but for held postings, you can still
-    forward or preserve the message (see below).
-
-<li><b>Approve</b> -- Approve the message, sending it on to the list,
-    or for membership requests, approve the change in membership
-    status.
-
-<li><b>Reject</b> -- Reject the message, sending a rejection notice to
-    the sender, and discarding the original message.  For membership
-    requests, reject the change in membership status.  In this case,
-    you should add a reason for the rejection in the accompanying text
-    box.
-
-<li><b>Discard</b> -- Throw away the original message, without sending
-    a rejection notice.  For membership requests, this simply discards
-    the request, again, without notice to the person making the
-    request.
-</ul>
-
-<p>For held messages, turn on the <b>Preserve</b> option if you want
-to save a copy of this message for the site administrator.  This is
-useful for abusive messages.  Turn on the <b>Forward to</b> option,
-and fill in the forwarding address if you want to forward the message
-to someone else not on the list.
-
-<p>When you're finished, click on the <em>Submit All Data</em> button
-at the top or bottom of this page.  This button will submit all
-selected actions for all administrative requests that you've made a
-decision for.
+<p>You can also <a href="%(summaryurl)s">view a summary</a> of all
+pending requests.