From f2fe735f7a207260680d75e5b18343eb72cf2eaf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: klm
Date: Mon, 13 Jul 1998 21:27:55 +0000
Subject: Small simplification of the text - the less run-on stuff the
 recipient has to read, the better!

---
 templates/verify.txt | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/verify.txt b/templates/verify.txt
index 4c1e35133..a03302905 100644
--- a/templates/verify.txt
+++ b/templates/verify.txt
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 %(listname)s -- confirmation of subscription -- request %(cookie)s
 
 We have received a request%(remote)s for subscription of your email
-address, <%(email)s>, to the %(listname)s mailing list at %(listaddr)s.
-To have this request carried out, please simply reply to this message
-(maintaining the subject line), or mail %(requestaddr)s with the
-following line - and only the following line - in the message body:
+address, <%(email)s>, to the %(listaddr)s mailing list.  To have this
+request fulfilled, please reply to this message (maintaining the
+subject line), or mail %(requestaddr)s with the following line - and
+only the following line - in the message body:
 
 confirm %(cookie)s
 
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